Reflections 4

To write a process essay you have to use the present passive. Usually is/are with the past participle.
With some verbs the simple past & past participle are the same, but with other verbs there are differences, e.g. go, went & gone.


The process essays are similar to the procedure.
• We use same linking words in both essays e.g. first, second, next etc.
• The essay structure is the same in both essays, introduction (25 – 30 words), the body (about100 words) and the conclusion (25 – 30 words).

To write compare & contrast essays you should have.
1. A brief introduction about the two things you are going to compare and contrast (in 3 to 4 sentences).
2. In the second paragraph you have to write at least 3 similarities of these two things.
3. In the third paragraph you have to write at least 3 differences about them.
4. In the last paragraph which is the conclusion you have to write which one you prefer and why.

The UAE & Brunei

Many people like to visit the UAE and Brunei because they are beautiful countries. Now I am going to compare and contrast the two countries.

Firstly, I’m going to write about the similarities. Both are Islamic countries and both have hereditary monarchies. In addition to that, both countries are very rich because of large-scale natural resources of oil and gas. Furthermore, both countries have national airlines, modern airports and well-developed infrastructures.

However, there are a number of differences. The first and most obvious is the geographical location. The UAE is in the Middle East whereas Brunei is a tropical country in the Far East. Another difference is the climate. The UAE has winter and summer, but in Brunei the weather is largely the same all year round. It also rains a lot more in Brunei and, as a result, the tradition is to build houses on stilts. Another difference is the currency, as dirhams are in the UAE and ringgits in Brunei. Furthermore, people drive on the right in the UAE but on the left in Brunei. Secondary education is single-sex in the UAE but co-educational in Brunei. A final difference is dress; people in Brunei do not wear dishdashas or ubayas.

Although there are many differences between UAE and Brunei they are beautiful countries. At the end I will say that I liked Brunei from what I have read about it especially the jungle and the weather there so I can't wait to go there and discover this beautiful country by myself.

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How olive oil is made

producing olive oil is a fairly long and difficult process but if you follow these steps you should end up with good quality oil.

First, between September and December, the olives are harvested by hand or with sticks and rakes. Then they are collected on nets beneath the trees. After that, leaves and small stones are removed and the olives are run through a washer to remove any impurities before crushing. Then, within 24-36 hours of picking, the olives are crushed by granite millstones. The olive paste obtained is layered on mats which are put under pressure from a screw or hydraulic press. The liquid produced is collected and put through a centrifugal separator to separate the water and impurities from the oil. Finally, after centrifugation, the oil is obtained.

Superior olive oil is amber in colors and opaque. The less acidic the oil, the better the quality can get.
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Reflection 3

When teaching process essays, I point out that very often the task, in the assignment or progress test, will specify the use of the passive. Basically, process essays involve the present passive, usually is/are with the past participle.

It's important to point out that with some verbs the simple past & past participle are the same, but with other verbs there are 2 separate forms, e.g. go, went & gone..

The essay structure is similar to procedure, i.e. intro (c. 25-30 words); main paragraph (c. 100 words); conclusion (c. 25-30 words). Total: 150-160 words.

The same linking words can be used: first, secondly, next, after that, finally.

UAE & Brazil soccer

Compare and contrast the overall play of Brazil’s national football team with that of the UAE. Say which of these teams you would rather watch and give reasons.

Most countries in the world have a football team, and Brazil and the UAE are no exceptions. I will describe the similarities and differences between the two teams, and say which one I would prefer to watch.

Like Brazil, the UAE is a member of FIFA which is an international body for regulating football. This means that both teams have eleven players, and substitutes are allowed. Both teams play to a system that has been agreed with the coaches beforehand. Brazil and the UAE defend when necessary but prefer to attack.

However, there are many differences in the style of play. Brazil plays at a higher level than the UAE and has won the World Cup. The former are fitter and faster than the latter and can adopt their style of play easily. This is because the Brazilian players have experience with teams all over the world while the UAE players usually play for local teams.

Although the UAE is my country and I always cheer for the football team I prefer to watch Brazil. There are many reasons for my opinion, the most important reason is that the Brazilian players are skillful and professional and they seem happy when they play. Another reason is that they play easily without any complication.

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Reflection 2

I learnt how to write narrative essays:

1- We use the past continuous to describe something happened while we were doing something else in the past, like: I was fixing me car when something broke …

2- We use the simple past for the main form and sentence , like I heard, we saw, they told us, they knew us…

3- Sometimes we use the past perfect to describe two actions which happened in the past, e.g. when I arrived at my house my parents were already gone

Process: orange juice

Orange juice is rich in vitamin C. Also, it is popular juice worldwide and if you need produced to make fresh orange juice you follow those steps.

In the first step, the orange juices are unloaded from the trucks. Second step, the orange are graded, washed and sized. After that the juice is extracted and they give the peel to feed the animals. The juice is sent to the evaporator at a high temperate for a short time and this producer concentrated juice. Then the juice is stored in the refrigerates. Then it is canned and shipped. In the last step, it is exported worldwide. Water is added to the concentrate.

Finally, the juice is sold in shops to consumers. Producing orange juice is quite a long procedure but, finally you will enjoy fresh and healthy orange juice.

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Reflection

I learned from my teacher who is Mr. Hedley that there are steps that I have to follow in each paragraphs or assays to get a good mark and they are:

In assays it should be includes three paragraphs total about 150 words, Introduction and conclusion have to be between 25-30 words and the main paragraphs have to be about 100 words.

·In narrative assays I have to write it by this order: Use past continuous if we have to describe something happened while we are doing

The same linking words can be used: first, secondly, next, after that, finally.

In the model essays I post in my blog I usually color code in order to show present passives, other passives and linking words.

Trip to Liwa

Six months ago I went with my friends to Liwa as a trip in the desert and we enjoyed our time there. We went there for one day and we came back the next day.

I went to Liwa with my friends Faisal, Ahmed and Salman. We went in Ahmed’s car which is a Land Rover. We moved in the afternoon from Abu Dhabi to Liwa and it took 3 hours to reach there. For me it was the first time to go camping in Liwa desert. The weather was wonderful and the sky was cloudy. When we first arrived at our location we started to prepare our things such as lighting a fire for the B.B.Q. and making coffee and tea. After that we sat together and enjoy our time there. Next day, we started to prepare ourselves to go back home. My friend Ahmed tried to start his car and it didn’t starts. We tried to call our friend who is living in Ghayathy but, there was no signal in our location. Suddenly, we saw a car cross over the dunes and come near to our location. We signaled to the driver to stop and help. He saw us and he asked if we needed any help. We told him about the problem with our car. He tried to fix our car and he did it. We thanked him for his help. He gave us his mobile number in case we needed any help in Liwa and he invited us to his house. We thanked him but told him we had to reach our homes before evening.

Finally, we reached our homes and we learned that we have to prepare carefully before we go on any trip.

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